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A broken toy ( 1 min read)

I sat down on a wooden bench in the farthest corner of the park. I looked down at my hands. They’d gotten wet wiping off my tears.

‘Hello,’ the voice emerged out of nowhere. I looked up.

There stood a tiny boy a few steps away, ‘did someone break your toy?’ He frowned.

I forced a smile, ‘I myself am broken,’ and sniffled hard.

He scrunched his nose, ‘even my most favorite toy is broken…so what?’

He added with a grin, ‘maybe you’re also God’s favorite toy…,’ he turned around and ran away into the dark.

Written by Chirasree Bose for A Month of Mini Writing Challenges 2017( a story with a lesson in it)

24 thoughts on “A broken toy ( 1 min read)”

  1. shewrites170 September 6, 2017 — 5:53 pm

    Wow
    Beautiful!!

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      Sreeblogs September 6, 2017 — 5:56 pm

      😊😊glad you liked it. Thank you

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      Sreeblogs September 6, 2017 — 8:23 pm

      😊😊 hehe thank you

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  4. Srijan September 7, 2017 — 11:54 am

    This is very Nice. :))

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  8. Sangbad September 7, 2017 — 10:20 pm

    Wah… surrealist…well written…

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      Sreeblogs September 8, 2017 — 8:00 am

      😊😊 thank you

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  10. Michael Medlen September 8, 2017 — 11:47 am

    Very succinctly written and yet very powerful…

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      Sreeblogs September 8, 2017 — 11:51 am

      🙂 thank you so much

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  11. Ravi Sidula October 9, 2017 — 12:29 am

    Innocence speaks a thousand words sometimes

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      Sreeblogs October 9, 2017 — 11:17 am

      Yes and sometimes wise words

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