you’re gonna die today… – The message popped up.
I frowned.
you’ve got 10 minutes…, another message arrived.
I looked around the tram and saw an old lady, a middle-aged man, a young girl and a little boy; they looked back at me with a strange smile lingering on their lips.
My phone lit up –
Well, let me refresh your memory…
My heart stood still.
Exactly one year back you murdered a woman who happened to have a mother…an elder brother…a younger sister and a 11 year old kid…remember???
I stood up; how did they find me, I pondered; I’d left that country. My mobile buzzed –
I hope you understood who your fellow passengers are…
I looked up; they all stood together, facing me.
I’d decided that I’d jump off the tram; it’d break a few bones…that’s it, I smirked and turned to run, but my mobile beeped again –
I’m waiting outside in a car just in case you jump and I can run over you…she was my wife…

Written by Chirasree, a dreamer for – FFfAW Challenge-Week of May 30, 2017
Word count – 171
Whoa – excellent! Gave me chills!
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Great scenario, well done. Really good, would love to read on and see if they can get out of it alive!
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😇😇. Thank you
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This one definitely gets you attention. Sounds like you are between a rock and a hard spot.
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Wow! Gripping!!
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Excellent story! Very chilling! It baited me right away and kept me wanting more. Welcome to the FFfAW challenge! We are happy you have joined us. If I have told you this before, forgive me. I have been away for a few weeks.
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Great story, lovely punchline.
xxx Huge Hugs xxx
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You’re so good at drawing your reader in super fast! I love it!
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Ooo I like this one a lot!
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oh revenge is always intrestng to read about and the way it started with messages being recieved it wa really amazing.
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Wow! that was seriously chilling.
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Wow. I’ve got chills!
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😄 thank you
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I want to know if you got out alive!
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Whoa! That’s one way to get revenge! Chilling story, and well done.
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Very well crafted. Kudos.
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Really scary …..
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😀😀 glad the story made you feel so
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Yikes! This is intense. Well done!
Going Home
Annie at ~McGuffy’s Reader~
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Not a house of horrors but. A tram of horrors. Great take on the prompt
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BRAVO 👏
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MOST WELCOME 😊
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Mysterious
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🙂
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Thriller👍
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